Wednesday, January 25, 2012

How should I end my story?

Silly as it sounds, it's about a fish who lears to fly. it's for a children's book for school. basically as soon as he hatches, felix (the fish) starts choking in the water. he ends up living on lily pads etc. he learns to swim holding his breath from a frog an fhow to walk on his tail from a snake xo) and meets a bird named jeepers who can't fly yet and relates to him. Felix needs to fly but how? he sprouts wings:

And worse were the itches annoying his sides

That turned into bumps that he could not hide.

Right behind his fins, they itched constantly

It made him think that he might have a flea



but then what, how does he learn? does jeepers teach him? do they learn together? is it by accident?

I need some ideas please,

i hate writers block.

thanks!

How should I end my story?
you should say how they both started by jumping off trees then they fall then an old frog tells them that the key to success is by believing in thy self and tells them how he almost drowned before he learnt how to wade and the like i hope i helped
Reply:he makes friends with a dog who teaches

him how to stratch fleas.

He follows the dog back to the farm where

the dog lives.

and lo and behold he meets the cow that

jumped over the moon.

The cow says, Fly? heck. that's easy. I'll

teach you.

And the rest is history.


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